June
16
I Need Some Advice on the Order of a Couple of Wedding Disasters for a Story I’m Writing?
Since the story is pretty involved, I’ll sum it up the best I can before getting to the question I have. The story is about a 16-year-old boy, who’s 21-year-old sister is getting married, and for some reason, he can’t stand his sister’s fiance. During the planning stages, the boy tries to sabotage things in order to halt the wedding. I have the sabotages planned out, based on two computer games: "Dream Day Wedding" and "Dream Day Wedding Married in Manhattan." All the disasters listed below come from the two games I mentioned.
The Flower Dilemma:
1. An attack of rare exotic beetles at one florists eats the bouquet (and then some!)
2. A Diva’s contract stipulates she should have roses filling her dressing room every day
3. A movie shoot closes all businesses on one street, which includes a florist
The Cake Dilemma
1. Bakery air conditioner malfunctions resulting in a cake meltdown
2. French chef has "inspiration" and turns the wedding cake into a cake which looks like it’s been designed by Jackson Pollock
3. A blizzard of flour storms another bakery the couple goes to, showering everything at the bakery, including a wedding cupcake tower
The Dress Dilemma:
1. Hot coffee and a white silk gown. You do the math
2. Dog gets loose into bridal salon and a good deal of the gowns are covered in paw prints
3. Seamstress chosen for TV show, and has to bring one completed "creation" for it, which happens to be the bride’s dress.
OK, there you have it. In what order do you think should our teenage hero pull off these disasters? And how should he be punished when his sister finds out he was the one who caused these "accidents" in the first place?
Don’t know about the order, but punishment?
He has to spend a whole day with his sister’s fiancee and be nice to him the whole time. That way he can get to know him better and start to like him more.
June 17th, 2010 at 2:12 am
Don’t know about the order, but punishment?
He has to spend a whole day with his sister’s fiancee and be nice to him the whole time. That way he can get to know him better and start to like him more.
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