Poem rate plz? 1-10?

An empty space,
In my life,
Gone,
For as long as I live.

Tears running down,
Flowers all around,
For an occasion,
I will never forget.

The suffering look,
He once had,
Is now gone,
Because he’s in a better place.

Heads on one’s shoulder.
Tissue flying around.
In remembrance,
Of my Uncle Phil.

10.
that’s a nice poem for your uncle becky.
he would LOVE it.

13 Responses to “Poem rate plz? 1-10?”

  1. That 70s Show Dude says:

    1, all poems suck
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  2. puppylover says:

    9 It’s pretty good. =)
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  3. MoMo C says:

    i don’t like the tissue flying around but i think its ok other than that 6
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  4. Capricorn. (2) says:

    7.
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  5. M I T C H says:

    9.5. Very deep and good.
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  6. dedanimul505 says:

    -10 youre arrangement is sorry
    it is so typical for people to write about the departed
    it is so tasteless and disrespectful to write about a loved ones suffering
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  7. blackgirlintampa73 says:

    8
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  8. ?JMC? says:

    10.
    that’s a nice poem for your uncle becky.
    he would LOVE it.
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  9. George Washington says:

    A 10! That is a beautiful poem!
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  10. *»«®eßeÇçå-®åd»«*™ says:

    ¡10! :D
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  11. Janet says:

    6
    not bad.
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  12. ? Hihijkjk12 ? says:

    Who’s Uncle Phil?

    Anyway, anyway, anyway, This poem is great and it deserve’s a…………..10!

    I don’t have A.D.D, I just have ……..

    Oh look! A squirrel!!!!
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